Writing Prompt 2
Agenda
1. Read today's blog.
2. Comment on this blog by writing at least five full paragraph. Each paragraph should have five or more sentences.
Objective
-CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.3 Write a narrative to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences.
-CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.3.BUse dialogue and description to develop experiences and events or show the responses of characters to situations.
-CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.3.C Use a variety of transitional words and phrases to manage the sequence of events.
-CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.3.BUse dialogue and description to develop experiences and events or show the responses of characters to situations.
-CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.3.C Use a variety of transitional words and phrases to manage the sequence of events.
Procedure
Answer the prompt by writing a five paragraph narrative. Your story should have transition words, a setting, plot, characters, beginning, middle, and end. Remember, you should write your story on paper, when you are done read it out loud to yourself or someone else, correct mistakes and then publish (Writing steps: prewriting, writing, revising, editing, and publishing). This activity should take you one week to complete.
Prompt
Write a story about flying to outer space and discovering a new planet!
*Outer Space Drawing by MGL Meiklejohn
Comments
I found a new planet
One day I woke up in the middle of the forest.And I saw a big portal and when I went inside it.I woke up and I was in the middle of outer space and I was floating around it was so fun.And then I saw something with a ring around it and it wasn't saturn it was a copy of it but it was red.It was so weird I don't know how to explain it it was hot when you got close to it I almost burnt myself when I got close to it.I thought I deserved to be on the discovery channel but I didn't have a camera with me it was so disappointing.
And I also saw a purple star in the middle of the planet and then the planet exploded.There was a ton of pieces of rock flying everywhere one hit me in the head and it hurt so bad.Also when I looked back it was like it never exploded it was so weird.I thought my mind was playing tricks on me but when I close my eyes and opened them again it was real and the planet was still there.It was like what it was so weird there was another weird thing I could breathe there you can't breathe in outer space.
Also I saw a cool round ball shaped planet everything was so weird in outer space.That round star exploded then all of the planets exploded including pluto .Then the same thing happened I thought I was being hypnotized but I didn't know.The cycle happened every hour until I fell asleep in space for 3 days time goes fast in space I said and then I saw a green thing on top of a planet and it was aliens in a saucer.I was so scared I hated space it was a disaster then I started running away.
And the aliens chased me for 2 minutes it was so tiring.And I hid behind a big rock from the explosion.Then they spotted me and when they did I got jump scared.I also woke up again in a alien spaceship.But I managed to get out by breaking the window and jumping out and escaping.
Also after that I saw the planet I discovered was spinning faster than normal.Everything was so weird in space and scary at this point I hated space.It was to weird you could float, breathe, planet exploded you could tell its weird by listening to it.I wondered what if I touched the planet so I went to the planet and I touched it.And a portal opened I went inside it and I was back at home sweet home all I could say is that I found a new planet.
One of my dreams was to one day be able to go to outer space. So I studied very hard to make my dream come true. Something I did was studied many things from outer space. Another thing I did was visit where people worked to go to outer space. Until one day a mail letter arrived. It was great news. The news were that I could go to outer space. My dream had come true.
Days later, my partners and I went to outer space in a spaceship. It was a very long trip but also fun because something new started for me and my partners. It was great and incredible to be able to be in space were very few can go. The firs thing we did was explore the moon and as we were exploring we saw several planets that we could explore. We were very happy to have an opportunity that not all people can have. One of my partners took photographs and then send them to earth so that other experts analyze them. We worked a lot exploring and when time was up of working, we returned to the spaceship and rest.
After we finished resting we did a little exercise. We do exercise so when we return to earth we don't faint. To have fun we read books, play cards, and talk to each other. But my favorite thing to do is to read books. I read for hours while floating in outer space. But then, time to work comes.
Each one of my partners has a very important job. One of them takes photographs and sends them to earth. The second one of my partners piloted the spaceship. The third one of my partners checked if the spaceship was okay. And my work is to do experiments and analyze things that we found.
While we were exploring we saw something extremely cool. It was a new planet. Me and my partners were all so happy. So we decided to explore it. It was similar to the moon but it was pink. It had a soft surface. Some of my partners took pictures and others explored. We spent several hours looking for interesting things. We had found hot rocks. The weather was a little hot in the day and cold in the night. It was one of the most amazing planets I had ever seen. Then, it was time to return to earth. Me and my partners were happy but at the same time sad because we wanted to keep exploring. It was a long but fun journey. When we got to earth our families were happy to see us. I hope soon return to outer space and to be able to explore if there is extraterrestrial life on this planet that we have just discovered.
4-23-2020
An Adventure
One day, I was in my room watching Disney+ when all of a sudden a big, blue, and purple portal was on top of my head. And I got sucked into the portal because all the energy was so strong. I tried to hold onto my bed but the energy was to strong it sucked my in. I was really panicked because I was in space! Then I decided to look around and explore. But then I remembered the only planets I could really get on were the moon, earth, and mars. Since all the other planets were made out of gas. After I decided that I should go to the moon first since I’ve always wanted to see it up close . Then I thought to myself,” how am I breathing if I don’t have any equipment?”. But I didn’t even try to figure that out.
When I got to the moon I looked down and then I saw the earth! It was so pretty when you could see it up close. And I layed down to see rocks which were actually stars. I admired them while I could. Then I took a little nap because it was so peaceful there and there was not much noise. After I woke up I did a few easy yoga. Because nobody could distract me so I took the chance. And it was worth it. I was more calm now but still I tiny bit stressed. Now it was time to head to mars.
Then the next planet was mars so I went to go explore it. And it was really pretty but there was not really a lot to do there. But, if your in space for a long time your muscles start to turn weak. So I decided to do some exercises to stretch out my body. Then I felt like doing something that I haven’t done in a while. And that was gymnastics. Because I’ve already stretched I went right into the flips. And when I was flipping, it was so easy because there was no gravity. Then I did a double backflip. It was awesome! I could do any flip! After all the flipping I decided to take a break and lay down. After it was time to head to earth. When I was heading there I saw something. It was, another planet!? So I decided to check that out instead.
Now that I was headed to the mysterious planet I was getting nervous, excited, and curious. After a few minutes I decided to take a snack break. I looked into my backpack and saw astronaut food. I reached in and graved it and ate it peacefully. When I was done it was time to go onto the mysterious planet. When I got onto it it was I bit chilly. Then I saw snow and ice everywhere! I decided to go and explore. Then I saw a forest coved in snow! It was so pretty. Then I kept walking and saw a ice cave! I went inside and there it was. The galaxy! It was beautiful. I admired it while I could because I had to get home soon. After a while it was time to go home.
It was time to go home. But, how am I going to get back I I was brought here in a portal! Then I thought, “ maybe if I Yelp portal it will appear”. I at least had to give it a try. Then I did what I told myself to do and it worked! The portal appeared and then I went through it. I was back home finally. That was a really weird yet cool adventure. Now that I know there’s a new planet I always dream about it. And once in a while I go and check out the planets. This was a very cool and crazy experience.
By: Yeshua Penate
One day a boy named Chris went on a mission to space to explore the galaxy.
He invented a big, bright red space rocket that was full of all sorts of gadgets. Once the space rocket was ready, he got in so he could start his mission. Then he got an idea, he decided to build a space hideout. He went home to get all the materials he needed.
Chris got wood, paint, metal, and even brought furniture. He spent days painting and building to create the best rocket ever. When Chris was done, he stepped inside and looked around. It was so big, it looked like a mansion. It was almost as big as a house but in space. It had a kitchen, living room, bedroom, and research rooms. It was great.
When Chris was in space, he was very happy to discover many galaxies and planets. He explored space for years and one day he discovered a new planet called Zork. On this planet, he found air so he could breathe without a mask. When he was exploring, he came across some creatures. They were small, green aliens. They had big eyes and a small, round face. “Hello,” he said. But the aliens didn’t respond. He said it louder, “Hello!” One alien came up and said it back, “He...llo”
“Welcome to our planet! You must be an Earthling.” one alien said. “Yes, I come from Earth,” Chris said. “I want to learn all about this planet,” said Chris. “We are sorry but we do not allow Earthlings,” the alien said back. Chris was sad to hear this. He packed his stuff and went back to his rocket. But he didn’t want to leave Zork. He really cared about Zork and the aliens so he never gave up trying to be their friend. As more days passed by, he climbed down his rocket to show the aliens. To his surprise, they liked the rocket and wanted to learn more about it. The aliens finally said, “You are welcome here.” And they became friends.
After a few years, Chris took a break from exploring and learning about Zork to get back to get to his normal life. He wanted to make his house bigger than before so he started to build it just like his rocket. As Chris grew older, he got married and had a family: a girl, a boy, a dog and a wife. He wanted to go back to Zork so he told his family to go with him. He was so happy when they said yes. He never felt so alive.
One day I was sitting on my bed playing a game, when out of nowhere a portal that was grey and swirling around was right in front of me. The force was so strong that it was slowly taking me inside of the portal. I quickly turned around and tried to hold on to my bed but at that point it was too strong that i couldn't hold on to my bed for much longer. Then suddenly I slipped and the portal took me away. I was so terrified, then I closed my eyes hoping that when I opened my eyes this would all stop and just maybe be a dream. I even pinched myself three or two times, but no, I was definitely not dreaming.
I was panicking and then I heard a noise. I don't know how to describe it but it felt like it was coming from inside of the portal, it was pretty loud so I was kinda freaked out.
I tried to move around but suddenly I realized that I was floating. "Am I in space or something!?",I told myself. Then finally I reached the end of the portal. At first I was really scared and terrified. But I calmed down a bit. I was trying to move around to see where I even was. Then I realized that I could see the moon and some of the other planets from far away. I was right!!! I was in space, although I did wonder how I was breathing. I wonder about that because when you go to space there is no oxygen. Also when you go to space you start to feel weak after being there for a long time, so that means that you need to exercise a lot.
The first thing that I did was check what planet I was on.
I looked around and what I saw was every single planet. I wondered, what planet am I on? I found a new planet??? I said to myself. I explored the planet for a bit. It was pretty small and could probably only have one person live on it, and that person would need to be small like me.
What am I going to name this planet? Also this is a planet where y can breathe. I had no idea why the portal would take me here but it was not that bad. I expected something bad to happen like if I would be stuck in the portal forever or at least something like that. But I am glad that that didn't happen to me.
I decided to look around the planet a bit more. I already knew that it was small, I already knew that I could breathe. But what I didn't know was that there was lots of portals all around the planet. And those portals connected to other dimensions. I decided to call this planet, The Small Teleport-er!
THE END....
Isabel Gonzalez
In in the year 2040 I graduated from Astronaut school. I started training to be an Astronaut because my first space mission was going to be in one year. In the mission we were going to be searching for new planets.I was very excited to search for new planets. I was also scare to go into space and this is what happen next.
We went to space on April 1, 2041. Going in the rocket was fun but scary. It was loud and I could feel my stomach getting sick. The rocket was fast and we were out of this world in a couple minutes. The view was beautiful and I said good bye to Earth.
A few months into our mission we discover a new planet. We called this planet The Future. The Future was big, Orange, yellow and beautiful. We discover The Future had some water and ice. We thought it would be a good Idea to land and see what else we could find.
When we landed on The Future we discover it was cold. We saw some snow in the mountains and some frozen lakes. We discover that we were able to breathe with out our space suits on. We were so exited to have found a planet were we could some day live. We could not wait for our mission to be over so we could share the news with Earth.
When our mission was over we were sad to leave the planet and go into space. We were also happy to leave because we were going to report our findings back to earth, we decided to take some samples with us. We were so happy to be the first people to find The Future. We were also happy to see our families after so many months of not seeing them. The scientist at NASA were very exited to see the samples we brought back from planet The Future. In two more years we will go back to planet The Future to continue exploring.
The End
Once I flew to outer space to discover a new planet that I called " Core". When I went into Core I landed my rocket ship that I called "The Flash of God". Then I went out with my astronaut suit to see what is at the planet Core. Then I discovered it had a mini mountain and the planet was made out of gas and rock. Also it is 1,017 meters and it is 100 meters wide.
I jumped really high and I was doing back flips, front flips, side flips and spinning flips. Then I sat a big flag that I designed that I said: The flash of God. Then I decided to stay there for four days. The 2 days I was there I flipped,ate,watched TV and I slept. On the third and fourth day I contacted to people then I ate, looked at internet on my phone, and I slept.
But then I wanted to stay there one more day, so I flipped and used my TV. Then I used my phone to see the internet then I ate. I looked at Core and I wonder if people are going to live in mars and then Core because its a beautiful place. I planned if we do live here we should plant trees and plants. If we do I would like to have good two story house to live.
Also if we do live in Core I am going to do flips and play the floor is lava but I will be kind of easy. I will make games like try not to speak or stand up, space tag and space hide and seek. Other games I will probably do is try to eat a doughnut in a string.I will try to get enough money to buy a commercial or a company like my own or some one else. I might get a nice property.
This adventure was cool I we do discover new planet and we could live there after mars. I hope can play outside like in earth in mars and a possible planet. I hope we can survive both mars and the planet. And I also hope insects, plants and animals can survive too. But we must wait in the future, it would be cool and surprising.
THE END!!!
ONE DAY MY DAD SAID THAT WE WERE GOING TO THE MOON .
I SAID I CANT BELIEVE THIS IS SO COOL .
HE SAID TO PACK AND THAT WE WERE GOING TO GO TO SPACE TOMORROW. MY FAMILY WAS SO EXSITED WE PACKED ALL OUR
IT WAS THE NEXT DAY WE WERE ALMOST DONE PACKING AND WHEN WE WERE DONE WE STARTED TO PUT ALL THE STUFF IN THE CAR THEN WE GOT IN TE CAR AND SAT DONW. MY DAD STARTED THE CAR AND LEFT WE FAUND THE PLACE AND GOT OUT. SOME MEN HELPED US WHITH OUR STUFF AND SHOWED US THE ENTRANCE. WE GOT IN AND MY DAD SAID HE NEW THE WAY TO OUR SPACE SHIP I WAS SO EXSITED TO SEE WHAT IT WILL LOOK LIKE. WE FINELY GOT TO THE ROOM WERE OUR SPACE SHIP WAS WE AND IT LOOKED SO COOL.
THE INSIDE WAS BIG AND THER WAS A MAN INSIDE THAT MAN WAS GOING TO HELP US DURING THE TRIP.THE MAN TURND ON THE SPACE SHIP AND WE ALL STARTED TO COUNT 3,2,1. I GOT TO SEE THE EARTH FROM SPACE AND OTHER PLANETS TO SOME PLANETS WERE BIG AND OTHERS SMALL. WE ALL STARTED TO FLOTE. THE PLACE WE WANTED TO GO TO WAS THE MOON THE MAN OPEND THE DOOR OF THE SPACE SHIP.
WE GOT OUT AND I WAS SO HAPPY BECAUSE I WAS STANDING ON THE MOON. I GOT A BOX AND FAUND A LOT OF ROCKS THAT I WANTED TO TAKE HOME . MY BROTHERS HELPD ME. MY MOM AND DAD WERE LOOKING AT THE EARTH IT WAS SO COOL.THE MOON WAS BIG AN THER WAS VERY BIG ROCKS.
WE WERE VERY SAD BECAUSE WE HAD TO GO HOME.WE SAW
PLANET MARS FROM FAR AWAY IT LOOKED BIG AND IT WAS COLOR RED. THEN WE SAW JUPERTER IT HAD A BIG RING ON IT. AND THE LAST PLANET WE SAW WAS URANUS IT WAS BIGER THAN PLANET EARTH. WE FINELY GOT TO EARTH WE GOT OUT OF THE SPACE SHIP AND WE ALL LOVED TNIS TRIP TO SPACE.
The Discovering of Planet Rosy
Today the best thing happened. It all started while I was eating breakfast. I told mom and dad, “I want to discover a planet.” They told me that, “That’s a good goal for when your older.” But I wanted to discover one now so I set on a mission to discover a planet. “Wish me luck!” I said as I left the kitchen and walked to my bedroom. I started thinking of the next steps.
I knew the first step to discovering a planet was building a rocket. So, I gathered all the materials I could find and started building. I first put metal pieces together. Then I screwed on the nuts and screws on the pieces. I painted lovely colors on it and I was finished. So I grabbed the rocket and put it outside in the yard. I would launch it there later.
Before launching into space I had to build an astronaut suit. I started creating so I grabbed materials. After building I painted the suit with a nice smooth white color I then made a map of space. I drew the solar system and some other planets I knew. I put on my astronaut suit, and then I ran as quickly as I could outside. I launched into space… 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Blast off!
So I’m in the rocket controlling it and looking for a new planet. When I saw something, it was a completely new planet! It was a hot pink color. I landed on the planet. I looked around and saw very pretty roses and pink rocks. I had decided I had been the first to discover this planet and grabbed my camera. I took pictures of the flowers and rocks.
Then I quickly went inside the rocket and started home. As soon as I got home I told my parents everything. I showed them the pictures on my camera. They told me, “Wow you did this all by yourself?!” I told them, “Yes.” They also asked me a question “What are you going to name the planet?” I said, “I will name it planet Rosy.” They said, “We are so proud of you!” and they gave me a hug. They took my pictures and put them on the refrigerator.
The End
One day I woke up.And I was in the middle of nowhere.And then suddently.I saw a big portal.And then I shouded !IS SOMEBODY HERE¡and then nobody answer so I whent to the portal.when I whent inside I was on a planet name moon so I was in a planet I saw a rock and it was big.It was gray and heavy.
And the whole thing was gray.And they were gravity and it was fun.Because I was jumping and making some flips it was so cool.Next I saw a lot of planets it's more cool.Then I was founding a lot of rocks.And the rocks were call moon rocks.
Then with the rocks I build a bulding made out of rocks.Next I brought some food it was a ice cream samwish .It was delicious.Next when I saw the Earth I did not know why is the Earth green,blue and white.Because when you look close you look close you see houses but when you look far you only see white.
Then I say that I have some crayons.so I color a moon and me on the moon.So and I brought a toy that is a car.And I color a dog and cat.so the toy I made a ramp.So it went and it crash so slow.
So more later I did more cool stuff.like jumping,playing and building.And last I saw a portal again so I went inside the portal.And then thistime im in my house.I was so happy to be at home.
THE END
Soon it was dark, I could see a lot of stars and planets passing by. I noticed next to pluto there was something glowing purple, it was a gigantic planet! I got out of the spaceship, and I saw that the planet was very lonely, glowy and I thought there were aliens. When I went back to Earth, I brought my friends to the purple planet. Later, we all decided that the name of the planet should be Gamer World.
After we named the planet, we went into the spaceship and went to Gamer World. When we got there, we explored the planet. Later, we found some buildings and decided to explore them. While we looked around we found weird alien looking plants. Then Edgar, Alonso, Oscar, Steven, Willy, Jose, Yeshua, and I got jumped by baby Yodas. Edgar and Alonso started screaming and Yeshua told us to run. Then Steven got kidnapped by the baby Yodas.
When they took Steven we made a plan to save him. We remembered that we saw an alien laser gun, so we got it and went to rescue him. When we got there, we had to kill the giant baby Yoda to save Steven. Then we got Steven back and he said “wow they were nice”. We decided to talk to the baby Yodas and became friends.
Later, we all got along and they showed us all around the buildings. Then Yeshua said “give me a minute”, so we did but he was making an evil plan to kill the baby Yodas. His plan was to take them to earth and kill them. Soon we were going to leave, but Yeshua said “we should take the baby Yodas”. When we got back to earth, Yeshua was smiling the whole time, he got the gun and shot them all. I opened my eyes and realized it was all a dream
And I went to have fun and explore space to see how does it look like and when I when to explore it look so cool and the
Scary look so cool so then I stare to play and then I started to run around and I had A lot fun and then I got tiered.
So then I rested in a planet and the planet was so cool I started to explore the planet that I found and the planet was cool so I went to sleep wen a wake up I went to look to another planet so then I went to the moon I found lots of rocks and it started to get boring and I was looking fo the earth a earth was so beautiful.
I wanted to go back to my house but I did not no how to go back home so I started to think how to go back home so I started to do things that I was thinking and It did not work but I did not give up so then I gave up because it was hard to go back home so then I remember how I got here.
And I found the planet that I woke up so then I noticed how I came in space I was asleep wen I got here so I started to run around for I could get sleepy but I didn’t get tired so I started to jump lot playing .
And then I when to sleep and when I who up I when in my Haydee
Si then my dad and my mom and i told them and i to
that I har a lot uf fun.
A NEW PLANT
One day I woke up in the rain Forest. I saw a portal Next to a tree. After I got inside it was dark. Then i woke up in out of space. I was in the moon flouting around the moon it was fun. Then i went into the dark then I got chased by Aliens. It was tiring so I just sit down.
I saw another portal so I walk to it. I woke up in the middle of a war.I had to run but I heard somebody scream for help. So I went to see it was my partner that got lost. So we went running to the other portal and we woke up in a wild fire it was scary then we herd somebody scream.
We went to see but somebody stop us from going so We went to the portal. We woke up in a plane that was gonna fall.We saw a portal outside the plane. it was fun exploring a lot and tiring so we went to the portal. and went home and sleep.
Author: Laylani
Title: THE NEW LIFE IN SPACE (part1)
One day I was laying in bed when suddenly the thought of going to space occurred to me. Later that night when I was preparing myself to go to sleep I saw a bright light in the distance, at first I thought the light was coming from a car but it kept coming towards me and then I felt my body lifting off the ground. The light kept on lifting me higher and higher, until I was in space. The light took me to different planets like venus, mars, neptune, and many more. I was pleasantly surprised by how beautiful it all was. I really wished I could live on one of these beautiful planets.
As the light continued taking me further from the other planets it seemed as if everything was strangely disappearing, and turning pitch black, so I began to worry because all I had seen before was light, but now it was all so different. Could this darkness be a sign of the end? Could it all mean I was about to fall into a deep pool of darkness? But as I was beginning to get even more scared I finally saw something that gave me a bit of hope. It was a shimmering glow with the nicest golden sparkle. As I began getting closer to that glow I realized it was a planet that surely no one had ever discovered. In my whole life I had never read in history books of anyone crossing that far to the side of pure darkness.
When I landed there I got scared because I didn't have any breathing protection but it turned out to my surprise that I didn't need it at all. Thats because the air was so easy to breathe just like on earth but better because it was fresher. As I started walking I noticed that the air wasn't the only thing that was familiar to Earth. The houses, the streets and the markets
were also similar but just a bit more colorful and happy. This brightness had completely grabbed my attention. It filled me with so much joy, this was the place I practically had always wanted to live in. As I started walking more and more I began wondering something, there was something missing, humans! Was this place abandoned?
Title: THE NEW LIFE IN SPACE (part 2)
My curiosity grew, I just wished I could experience this planet even more. I wanted to have some human interaction. I began running towards one of the houses. It wasn’t just a plain house, it was a very magical house. It was made out of crystals, the crystals were made up off the brightest colors and they gave off one of the most beautiful glow I had ever seen. This was all so new to me and I just couldn't hold in my excitement. I had to knock on that door. A lady answered the door, when she saw me she started screaming at the top of her lungs, as I calmed her down, she asked, "me what are you!" “A human”, I said. Out of nowhere she started laughing as if it were a joke, “You're joking right? That must be a costume, there is no such thing here”, she said I just stood there speechless. After that, she figured out this was no joke, so she left for a few minutes to get her phone, I'm sure, since i heard her dialing and talking to someone else. “Hurry! I think I discovered something, she says she's a human”.
She told me not to move because she was going to come out, I heard the door knob slowly turning. She opened the door completely and made her way outside, I looked directly at her and I was instantly blinded by her shimmering skin. Her body was even brighter than the house itself, it was covered in what appeared to be millions of little tiny particles of glitter, and she had the most gorgeous long pink waves as hair. That beautiful sight was quickly interrupted by what appeared to be the voices of a crowd. So I turned around and there they were, people of all the colors of the rainbow, beautiful and sparkly just like her. The streets that had once seemed so lonely were now more alive than ever.They approached me, we were all looking at each other after a few minutes of silence one of them said “Don't worry, you don't have to leave, were just curious, we like different around here” then I heard an echo saying "Laylani!" It started to get louder "Laylani!", then I woke up to my mom calling me to go to school.
So after I woke up still in space and I was kind of mad so I just kept going forward and saw cool kinds of planets and had cool colors some where purple,blue,green,pink,and orange.After that I ran into the moon and it looked cool so I just took a little rest so I sat down and took a little nap.
After I woke up I just kept on going forward so I can find earth so I just kept on going on and on it took a little while.Then I finally found earth so l went to it but after I go I’m just going to play for a little while.
So I was playing for a little bit after I go back and I was tired so l did then I fell asleep and I didn’t now what to do.
After that I heard a voice saying “William” “William” so then i woke up and y mom was saying come eat an it was just a dream
My dream came true and my dream was to discover all the planets and I think it is gonna be fun.
One day my dream came true .My dream was to go discover all the planets and it came true .So i went to discover all of the planets.So y vearlly discover 2 planets and am happy.Next I went to discover an other planet it was really fun then I left the planet.
So then I went visit 3 more planets and it was really fun visit 3 more plants and it was fun.And a still needed 3 more planets to discover .It is so fun to go visit plants and I was so happy.I am so happy and y still need 3 more plants to discover .So all of the plants I visit were fun and I was happy.
So the next planet I visit was so fun and happy.It was so fun and I was laughing , to go to the other plants.So y still need 1 more plant and I think it is gonna be fun.It is already the last plant.The last plant was so fun.I was so happy.
My dream came true y love my dream this is the best dream.