Writing Prompt 1
Agenda
1. Read today's blog.
2. Comment on this blog by writing at least one full paragraph. Each paragraph should have five or more sentences.
Objective
-Review the parts of speech.
-Use sentences that express a complete thought.
Procedure
Read the blog and follow instructions. Remember, you should write the prompt and your response on paper, when you are done read it out loud to yourself or someone else, correct mistakes and then publish.
Prompt
Imagine a giant box is delivered to your front doorstep with your name on it. What’s inside and what happens when you open it?
Comments
4-7-2020
One day there was a big box on my front porch. I grabbed the box and it said, “For Shaila”. I picked up the box and took it inside. I opened the box little by little and then I saw confetti and balloons coming out of the box! I was a bit skeptical at first but then I said to myself, “what’s the worst that could happen?”. Then I saw another box in the box. I was very confused, was this a prank? As I lifted up the other box I saw it said, “ Trampoline “. I was so happy, me and my sisters have always asked our parents to buy us a trampoline.Then I helped my dad build the trampoline. After he was done building it I got on it and jumped around. But the weirdest thing was that my birthday was coming up. But I was extremely excited I got a trampoline!
There was a giant box in my front door. There was a puppy in side of the box and it had a note with name . I told my mom before I brought it in to see who it was from and check the address. I saw it had my name so I brought it inside and named the puppy Sky. I'm going to have fun with him and I hope my other dog will like him too.If my dog likes him he will be a new member of my family. That's what I will do if I find a box with a puppy inside at my front door.
I will use the T.V.inside the house for a little bit.Then I will use the T.V. to see the funny shows.Then I will turn of the T.V. to go to sleep.Then turn on the T.V. to wash the funny show. Then tomorrow use the T.V. again.
There was a knock on my door. I looked at my window, it was a box? I opened my door and i took it inside my house. I told my mom and my little sister to see this box,my mom opened the box to realize it was a MrBeast merch hoodie and then, I wore it. I’m going to use it when quarantine ends and hopefully I don’t forget to use it when I’m going to go to school.
One day , I woke up and heard a nock on my door . I was surprised because I wasn’t expecting anyone. When I opened the door there was a giant box in front of my doorstep. The package said “ to Laylani “ I brought it inside , my mom said “don’t open it “,but I began to get curious because we haven’t ordered nothing.When the hours began to pass by my curiosity began to grow. I decided to sneak the box to my room ,I opened the box and there was a...... polaroid camera!! I was so happy I always wanted one of those cameras . Then I seen a note that said it was a surprise for my sisters birthday. I was kind of disappointed. No wonder why my mom has said not to open it
One day a man herd a doorbell he open the door a he saw a box a big box and he bring it in the house and he open it.Inside was a little kitten so the man was happy.And then he started to call him fluffy because it was fluffy and it was a girl.so he started to we're should the be maybe in my room.So he went to the store and buy cat stuff.So he went back to the house and give the kitten some milk and some food.And he say that he will take care of the cat forever.
Today there was a giant box at my porch with my name on it. When I opened it I wasn't sure what it was. There were instructions and a bunch a of different parts in bags. Then, I realized the instructions showed how to build a trampoline, and I got very excited.
Then, my dad came and took the stuff out of the box and started building it. Then, after 2 hours, he told me it was finished and I was very surprised. When my brothers got home from the store we all played in the trampoline and it was so much fun.
And I was so surprised because it had my name on it, i brought the box inside the house
and I asked my mom and dad If they bought it and they said no my mom said open it
And I started shaking the box and I heard something bouncing
I was wondering what could it be ?
I was so exited that I started opening the box
It took me like two minutes to open it and it was a soccer ball wow I said
I liked it so much it was so colorful I started playing right away with my brother outside
It became my favorite soccer ball.
The Mystery box
Today the coolest thing happened. While I was eating lunch I could hear the doorbell ringing. So my dad went to answer the door. And to my surprise there was a package with my name on it! But my dad and I didn’t remember ordering anything. I still opened it and inside was a computer! Then dad said “Surprise”! I was so happy.
THE END
One day I was laying in my bed and I heard a knock in the front door I opend the door and I saw a giant box .I brouth the box inside while I was walking I wonder what was in the box then I opened the box and it was a jumper I was so happy . So my dad set up the jumper and then he finally finished and I star jumping .I past the hole day jumping in the jumper.It was so fun jumping in the jumper.It was the best day of my life.